Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Also do you guys have any tips on not scrambling for words? My elevator pitch was a little short. Where should I expand more for next time?
The video was really good and once again the idea is great. I thought it was a very good idea that you included statistics in the video. This provide more evidence as to how useful the app will be. In the video, however, you could have spoken a little louder, have more variation in your tone, and made more emphasis on certain idea. This will be more impactful to the audience and possible investors. Overall, the video was very good.
The video was really good and once again the idea is great. I thought it was a very good idea that you included statistics in the video. This provide more evidence as to how useful the app will be. In the video, however, you could have spoken a little louder, have more variation in your tone, and made more emphasis on certain idea. This will be more impactful to the audience and possible investors. Overall, the video was very good.
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